Mike:
I like the transitions in between the sounds, I think the fades are done very nicely. I don't really understand the story fully, so maybe that could be further developed. The main tone/theme I understood was someone walking around through different areas.
Rob:
The beginning of the sound scape is super cool and reminds me of the beginning of a scifi movie. The mood is a bit hard to place as the beginning seems stressful and cryptic but the middle and ending seem a bit more calming with the typing and water noises. I think the mood was supposed to be stressful/cryptic.
Alki:
The overall tone is so creepy, especially in the beginning, but in a well thought out and rhythmic manner. I think in the latter half, the sounds lose a bit of tension and starts to sound a bit more like music instead of an intense situation. The tone is a bit creepy and I get like an empty and almost sorrowful mood from it as well.
Jeremy:
I think the overall concept is really interesting. I think that some of the sounds could be blended a bit more however. I think the overall tone is peaceful, especially with the nature sounds.
Cal:
The switch from the baby noises to the music is so eerie and well done. I think some of the bell noises at the beginning and middle could've been edited a bit more to sound more eerie, maybe more distortion? The overall tone is very creepy and kind of reminds me of like an abandoned amusement park.
Julia:
The sounds of home life and living with other people are spot on. I think there could maybe more pauses between some of the noises (i.e. the colored pencils and typing). The overall tone is very sweet and motherly.
Caden:
I think the heavy breathing really set the tone to the whole thing. I think some of the sounds could've faded better with each other though. I think the tone is supposed to be creepy and unsettling.
Garrett:
The echoed voices and other sounds going on really create an anxious atmosphere. I think at the beginning, the nature sounds kinda conflict with the stressful nature of the rest of the sounds. Just like the title the soundscape is a stressful morning and it definitely feels like that.
Tasia:
I think the beginning sounds super eerie and interesting. I don't think that the beginning is super cohesive with the rest of the sound scape, like the shower going, eating, and the cat meowing. I think the overall theme is showing someone's average day.
Brendan:
I think the beginning with the blender and coffee noises is put together really well. However, I think some of the sounds end too abruptly. I think the mood is supposed to be centered around someone's daily life, but I have a hard time telling.
Jordan:
The beginning is super pleasant to listen to, especially with the guitar sounds. I think the tapping noise with the echo is a bit confusing whether its another set of foot prints or something else.
Jake:
The beginning with the different voices is just so good. The bit of the song I think is a little out of place. The overall tone i got was humorous and weird.
Maggie:
The different tones are very understandable. The first bit is a bit out of place and kind of doesn't go along with the rest. The theme sounds like someone going thru different scenes.
Anjali:
The entire soundscape really conveys your theme. I think there should maybe be more pauses in-between some of the activities going on. The theme is the sounds of a café.
Dzifah:
I think the overall soundscape is very understandable for what you're going for. I think that some more sounds could be over layed especially at the beginning with the water filling. The overall theme is a chef kitchen.
Michael:
The mix of sounds at the beginning, especially with the guitar are really nice. I think some of the sounds, like the tapping could be a little more quite and have more fading in them. The overall theme is the color purple.
Megan:
Theres a clear and distinct story with the way the sounds are edited together. I think the elevator portion is a little confusing compared to the water bit. Overall, the theme is sounds of water and the sea.
Gavin:
I think the overall theme is unique and clear. I think the bit with the baby laughter is a little out of place. The overall theme is the ambient noises of a shipyard.
Jacob:
I think the bell part at the beginning is nicely edited. Theres a little silent part after the soda can opening that I think could be shorter. The overall theme is someone whose on a trip.
Sarah O.:
I think the blending of the sounds of really nice. I don't really see a underlying theme or story. To me the overall mood is someone hearing background noises but blocking them out.
Calvin:
I really like your concept and think its really unique. I think the dripping sound could be played with more. The overall mood is very creepy and unsettling.
Alan: The distortions sound really cool and scifi-esque at the beginning. I think some of the sounds in the naturey part could fade a bit more. Overall, I kinda got an unsettling feeling from the soundscape.
Comentários